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Dragoona
06-12-2006, 11:35 PM
I wrote some lyrics/poem last night and I need to see if you guys can see what I'm trying to say. I'm wonderring if anyone can get the point of these lyrics.


--Tick Tock--


Tick tock tick tock

My mind moves around and around
Taking destiny’s wheel for a night on the town.

Tick tock tick tock

A simple moonlight sky
Burning into my vein
The navy blue virgin eye
Up above is smiling at me

Tick tock tick

I see a light of god
Flash instantly
A small tremor of the motionless sight above

Flash again
But with a low howl
Something bothers me
But I cannot turn back

Snapping of the fingers start to boil
From my glass eye
Commanding me to stop
But I cannot stop the stride

The choir begins a crescendo
One of massive beats and snaps
The flashing grows louder and louder
Until the trees falls from its branch

My feet are now in command
Running from the darkening sky
Fate is growing dimmer
And Time ticks by

Tick tock tick tock

Tick tock tick

The flashing light stops flashing
My feet end their drill
I look at my clock
To see time standing still

Pig
06-13-2006, 12:23 AM
Copyright them.